Tyler's Quotes "There is no greater love than to lay down one's life for one's friends. John 15:13.

Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Final Blogger Reflection


  1   The paragraph above I have chosen because it best shows my writing voice out of the blogs I have written this trimester. Some of the words or phrases that shows my writers voice are love, wonderful, “I will love and be grateful”, “because I really love books”. These words or phrases show my personality in my writing well. I really love to read books on my free time so it tells you that I really love books. Also I use casual diction like wonderful and grateful this shows my personality because I use those words in the real world. I directly put my every day words on the paper and that is voice.                           

2    In my passage I used a lot of diction but not much syntax but I still have some. Some syntax that I have in my writing is the sentence length; I have the same length of sentences all through my blog post. They length of the sentences range from 9 to 15 words per sentence. “I am nearing the end of your wonderful story called the Ender's Game” this sentence is 9 words. “Back stories always are very good because it tell you how there life is” this sentence is 14 words. One diction technique I used a lot was low/informal diction. Some examples are wonderful, grateful, hanging, and chair. All of these words you could change into more formal synonyms of the word. I did this because it is a friendly letter and the reader doesn't want to be confused with words they never heard of in a friendly letter.


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